LittleBlueAnt's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Remnants]

Really good for being done in 52 hours. I do wish your magic meter restored faster, but I have no real complaints besides a few nitpicks. Several years ago I tried to make a homebrew NES game with similar gameplay to this, and this is how an action RPG should be done.

MintPaw responds:

I've played with the mana regen rates, maybe grab a friend and give it another go. I'd love to hear whatever nitpicks you have. Never give up on developing!

[Rainbow Dash Flap]

Passable Flappy Bird Clone. Everything seems to be working in order, but I've seen a million of these types of games and I've grown tired of them. You did come close to breaking the mold though with that power-up that lets you break through the pipes. If you return to this genre, I want to see you do some crazy stuff! Between this and the Nyan Cat game I saw earlier, you're games so far have been unoriginal, but polished. You have potential, so don't give up!

A more minor nitpick, but you should strive for more diversity if a sound effect is getting repetitive. Dash yelling "yeah! yeah! yeah!" over and over again is a bit grinding to the ears. The best way to fix this would be to alternate between 3 different sound effects at random. If you want to get real picky, you can bend the pitch very slightly at random too :P

Now don't get me wrong, Dash is awesome ^_^

KiiraGames responds:

Hahah if I return to this kind of game I will most definitely do all that you said. :) I know what you mean by it getting old. Maybe I could think up a way to add more creativity to it. I've got some creative ideas, but for the langest time I haven't had a team to help me make them come alive, but now I do, for the PO4 contest and hopefully after that.

Dash is most definitely awesome, I'm glad you think so! And I'll definitely make another game like this with a lot more to offer than this did.

[Pong Nyan Cat]

This needs more work before you submit it. The score doesn't work, so it defeats the purpose of the entire game. It also could use more substance; pong is too basic of a game. See if you can try and make pong more interesting by taking advantage of Nyan Cat. Nyan cat should be batshit crazy with insane music and weird stuff flying around the screen. That'd be a goofy and interesting game.

Not too bad for a first attempt though. The core mechanics work, but you should polish it more before you submit it.

carolmoneta responds:

Hm, thanks for your comment! It's just a test, I'm new to the site and also new in this area.
I will work to make a game more fun. ttyyy :D